Silent sea

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Devious_Britches (smarty pants) on Saturday, 10-Sep-2005 0:49:47

I made a wish into the silent sea and the waves carried it away.
I wonder if it shall reach you on a cold and lonely day.
I wonder if it will arrive about the time the moon shines upon the ground,
the same moon that shines on me.
I wonder if you will whisper an answer back into the silent sea.

Post 2 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Saturday, 10-Sep-2005 9:27:37

Wow! Bravissima!

Post 3 by sjtaylor (I can't call it a day til I enter the zone BBS) on Sunday, 11-Sep-2005 2:04:35

awhwhwhwhww, nice. and when i read the heading of your post, i thought it was the letter c. y'know, silent c as in scissors? *grins.

Post 4 by bashful (professional hypocrite) on Sunday, 11-Sep-2005 8:14:41

Very beautiful. Kind of gave me a calm and relaxed feeling.

Post 5 by jessmonsilva (Taking over the boards, one topic at a time.) on Sunday, 11-Sep-2005 8:17:55

I like it, good poetry, you'd be an excellent lyricist.

Post 6 by dissonance (Help me, I'm stuck to my chair!) on Sunday, 11-Sep-2005 17:30:13

That was beautiful, so full of straight-forward mystery. I love it!

Post 7 by Devious_Britches (smarty pants) on Monday, 12-Sep-2005 10:28:22

thank you guys.